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Post by coldmercurywitch on Jul 25, 2003 6:13:52 GMT -5
Thank you so much, Di and Robin, for your comments on my story.
I agree with your comment on the blurriness with changing perspective in some parts of the story. I do have a bad habit of doing that because of the way I think, and I'm working on fixing it, but thankyou for pointing it out to me. It lets me know I need to buckle down.
I may add a little piece to the end of this story, and then I think it will be done with. I have a new character to write about anyway... or I'm in the middle of developing a new character to write about. I'll probably start a new thread for it.
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