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Post by Chris_Valentine on Mar 15, 2002 17:15:13 GMT -5
Wow, were the dolphin's teeth that scary?
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Post by Missy_Brown on Mar 15, 2002 17:18:22 GMT -5
[shadow=red,left,300]lol. yeah i was only 11. and the dolphin opened its mouth (like smiling) and i was like holy crap! [/shadow]
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gabi
Ravenclaw Alumni
this is a working title for a really long book
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Post by gabi on Mar 15, 2002 17:20:33 GMT -5
Ahem. MY 7th grade science teacher kept dead mule, horse, javalina, and goat fetuses in jars. It was extremely gross. But this isn't a creepy science teacher thread, it's about Chris's story. It's really good! Please post some more soon!
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Post by Leia Skye on Mar 16, 2002 13:34:39 GMT -5
[glow=pink,2,300]*taps foot impatiently*
and exactly where do I come into this story??
*blushes* um, i mean...great story, sweetie! i desperately await the next installment, regardless of whether i'm involved or not, simply becuase you are the greatest ever! ;D[/glow]
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Mar 18, 2002 11:22:49 GMT -5
I loveth thee Leia! You're in the next chapter post thingie. I'm just having a little trouble. My creativity is gone at the moment. I'll write more next hour. *laugh* I do all my best thinking when I'm bored and not paying attention in school.
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Mar 18, 2002 12:49:56 GMT -5
Chris sighed to himself as he made his way back towards the cabin he shared with Pansy. Kyra and Gen had seemed nice enough, he just wished he hadn't told them about the spider. He looked up and noticed a girl about his age glaring at him slightly. "I need to get back there." she said. Chris made a face at her. "I'm not going to move just because you tell me to." he said. The girl glared at him a moment longer before she broke into a smile. "My name's Leia Skye." she said holding out her hand. "Chris Valentine." Chris replied suspiciously. He looked at her outstretched hand and then at her for a while. "I'm not gonna kill you.....yet." she said laughing. Chris shook her hand and smiled. "Why do you need to get back there?" he asked curiously. "Tracking someone. Wanna help?" she asked, an evil smile forming. "Sure." Chris said as he recognized the opportunity to cause a little mischief. Leia smiled and pulled out rope, a potatoe sack, and some cheese. "Here." she said as she shoved the rope and the potatoe sack into Chris's hands. She pushed past him and ran down the the train, Chris followed closely behind her. The pair came upon a cabin with a closed door and Leia help up her index finger to quiet Chris' questions. Silently she opened the door and crept inside. She looked back at Chris and beckoned him inside. Chris did as he was told and crept inside after Leia. He smiled at what he saw inside the cabin. A boy who was maybe their age or a little older slept soundlessly in his seat, completely unaware of the prescence of the pair. Leia smiled down at the sleeping blond as she grabbed the rope from Chris and began to tie boy up. "Wakey wakey future Ravenclaw!" she yelled. the boy awoke with a start and looked up at her. "Who are you?" he asked. "I'm Leia, dearest!" she said as she finished with the ropes. Chris handed her the potatoe sack and the pair proceeded to stuff the blond in it. "Okay, blondie!" she giggled, "Tell us your name and the house you want to be in." The boy stared at her dully before annswering. "My name is Nialle, and I'm going to be a Ravenclaw." he said. Chris opened his mouth to make some kind of comment when a familiar hand grabbed onto his ear and pulled. "Get back to the cabin Chris!" Pansy yelled, "Mum and Dad said for you to behave." Pansy dragged Chris back down the train to their cabin and shoved him inside. Chris sighed to himself and silently wondered what Leia would do to Nialle.
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Post by Missy_Brown on Mar 18, 2002 13:35:53 GMT -5
[shadow=red,left,300]lol chris that was funny! it was really good too!! cant wait for more...and i better be in this soon! j/k. ttul![/shadow]
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Mar 18, 2002 14:16:19 GMT -5
*whines* One person at a time. I'll meet you during the sorting ceremony... I think.
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Mar 18, 2002 16:25:32 GMT -5
Gomen! (sorry) I was talking to someone recently and it made me remember a few things. So I'm really sorry about this little section of the story.
Chapter Two: Hogwarts
To feel loved and wanted, what is that like? Chris silently thought to himself. All his life he had been thought of as a burden to his family. He was a worthless drag on the family as Pansy had told him so many times. As he sat in the cabin with her he wondered if he had ever been loved by anyone. He sighed to himself and looked out the window. The train would arrive at their destination in another hour and Chris wasn't too thrilled about it. "Hogwarts, just another place for me to fail." he said to himself. All his life he had felt like a failure, there was no gurantee that this place would be any different. He hung his head and leaned back against his seat, feeling lost and alone. "shouldn't bother me. I've always been alone." he whispered to himself. He didn't notice that Pansy had awoken and was now looking down upon him with a satisfied smirk upon her face. She tossed her head back and let out a little laugh. Chris looked up at her, on the verge of tears, and prayed she hadn't heard him. But prayers are rarely answered. "You will always be alone. You will never fit in anywhere. No one will ever accept you, Chris." she said. Chris lowered his head as the train came to a stop. They had finally arrived. Chris stood up, not looking at the people who walked past him, barely noticing the famous Harry Potter or the still tied up Nialle as he made his way into the group of first years.
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Post by coldmercurywitch on Mar 18, 2002 19:59:33 GMT -5
Ack!!! I've been sucked into another story! Thanx Chris! Lol. Just kidding. ;D This is really good. You'll have to put me in somewhere too. Not straight away of coarse, later on, like at the sorting ceremony, or maybe after that even. Anyways, it's a really good story so far, and I'm looking forward to the controversial bits.
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Post by Leia Skye on Mar 18, 2002 20:59:05 GMT -5
[glow=pink,2,300]*chuckle*
the still tied-up nialle...
ohhh it's beautiful! ;D[/glow]
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Mar 18, 2002 22:45:17 GMT -5
Well Leia would you untie him? I don't think you would.
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Post by Crys-chan on Mar 18, 2002 23:11:28 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]wahahaha! I love it!! you are such a good writer chris!! I think its perfect so far.. controversial?? YAY!! please please.. the only thing that could be changed maybe is to make actual paragraphs? but i love it.. keep up the good work ;D[/glow]
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Mar 19, 2002 8:06:26 GMT -5
*smiles at Crys-chan* Yes controversial, I am a slash fic writter. Um... yeah, paragraphs. The only reason it isn't in perfect little paragraphs like it usually would be is because I do it during class. I have to type really fast before the teacher comes around.
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Post by En on Mar 19, 2002 9:38:43 GMT -5
YAY! It's a Story of Us! Only... how comes I'm all tied up? hehe. It's good, Chris, I'm really liking the way Pansy is shaping up (or disliking in an artistic way?) and I can't wait to see where you go with this!
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