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Post by Chris_Valentine on Apr 8, 2002 14:03:02 GMT -5
Yay!! I did a good job then! *cheers for self* I'm glad you like the way it came out. Like Hika-chan said, it's kinda hard to write people exactly as they are so I apologize in advace for any little mistakes on your characters.
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Apr 11, 2002 10:02:21 GMT -5
With Missy gone the two ducked into the darkened empty classroom and stood in a dead silence for a moment, listening for any sign of Filch, his cat, or a ghost. Hearing nothing both boys sighed in relief.
"That was a close one. I thought that Gryff would've told for sure." Draco whispered staring at the closed door. "Nah, she'd get in trouble too. What's the point in that." Chris laughed. "Well then," Draco said becoming serious, "what did you need to talk to me about?" "I wanted to talk about your father." Chris replied with a shrug. "Oh.." Draco sighed, sounding both relieved and disappointed. "I need to know what he wants done with Potter." Chris finished. "Oh!" Draco exclaimed, "I forgot I didn't tell you." "Nope!" Chris laughed, "If I forgot to ask you Pansy would kill me."
Draco regarded Chris silently for a minute, smiling softly. Chris was nice enough to consider a true friend, sometimes Draco thought he seemed a bit too nice. Definately not world domination material, but maybe.....
"My father wants us to get as close to Potter as possible." Draco said darkly. "Oh, but what's the point in that? Why should we try and befriend him? Why not just finish him off now?" Chris asked, trying to sound as if taking Potter's life wouldn't trouble him. "Father says it'll be useful, trust me." Draco said, seeing right through Chris' lie. "I do trust you." Chris said solemly, "We better get back now."
Draco stood in bewilderment, Chris trusted him. He watched as his only true friend checked to see in the coast was clear and then left the room. He followed a moment later, still in shock from what had been said. They stopped in front of the entrance to the common room and looked around.
"Out for a night's stroll boys?" a voice from the shadows asked.
Professor Snape stepped into view, his face seeming a ghastly white in contrast to the black of his clothes as well as the darkness surrounding him. He looked at the boys momentarily before turning away.
"You're very lucky you're in Slytherin. If the two of you had been Gryffs..." Snape trailed off, laughing to himself a bit. "Just get back to bed before Filch finds out..... or I change my mind." "Y-yes sir!" Draco and Chris replied in unison.
The two boys whispered the password and dove into the common room in a dead run for the dorms. They didn't look back until they were safely in the first year boy's dorm. They sat for awhile, glad Snape favoured Slytherin house. They took time to catch their breath and with a final smile at each other they went to bed. Neither said anything, in fear someone may be listening in.
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Post by coldmercurywitch on Apr 11, 2002 10:08:34 GMT -5
Chris hun, this is getting really, really, REALLY good! I can't wait to see what happens next, and how you meet or notice everyone else.
Seriously, this is a really interesting story...got me all sucked in. ;D
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Apr 11, 2002 10:11:09 GMT -5
I have everything planned out in my head. ^_~ Of course I haven't met half of the interesting people that are gonna be in my story. It'll just take time. *smiles evilly* Ooh, and I have evil torturous things in store for Harry too! Mwahahahahahahahahah.. tee-hee! ;D
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Post by coldmercurywitch on Apr 11, 2002 10:18:48 GMT -5
YAY! Torture is so intriguing. ;D You arfe so lucky that you can write. I have so many things planned out in my head, but as soon as I try and start writing, it just doesn't sound right,or I can't get the right mood so I get pissed off and abandon it. But you have been writing this really well. Can't wait for more.
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Post by Red <Avantgarden Gnome> on Apr 11, 2002 18:47:02 GMT -5
Yay! Snape is the evil git we know and love! Chris love, I doff my cap to you. *doffs cap*
I can't wait till you write more, really... I'm not lieing here. I can't wait. I CAN'T!! Write more NOW!
*shoves parchment and quill at him*
Here! Here! It's like a drug! I'm suffering withdrawls!
*goes fetal*
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Apr 11, 2002 18:54:53 GMT -5
*eeps and stares at parchment and quills that were just shoved at him and then looks at Suzy who is in fetal position* Ano... Suzy-san, are you okay. *frowns and starts writting* I better get more of this done before anything else happens
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Post by Missy_Brown on Apr 11, 2002 21:40:04 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300] CHRISTOPHER LEE! *pauses* THAT WAS EXCELLENT! ;D ;D
anyways~if Snape doesnt like me im gunn cry! he likes me on here!lol.
and yes Suzy is right, Im the Evil Gryffindor, if you dont write i will be evil towards you!!! mwahhhaahaa! (lol) cant wait for more hun ttul byes![/glow]
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Post by Marcus_Flint on Apr 13, 2002 21:59:48 GMT -5
Awesome as usual!
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Post by coldmercurywitch on Apr 17, 2002 12:02:59 GMT -5
Come on Chris! You have to wite some more soon. ;D You haven't officially met me yet.
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Post by Chris_Valentine on Apr 17, 2002 12:35:55 GMT -5
I'm trying, but I have some illustration project to work on. I have to draw from some story chosen from me. I'll either draw stuff from this one, Rue's or miniH's. I just need their permission.
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Post by coldmercurywitch on Apr 18, 2002 10:21:52 GMT -5
Haha, that's cool Chris. I guess I'm just overly curious to find out how you meet me. What am I saying?! I'm overly curious full stop! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Chris_Valentine on May 6, 2002 7:21:30 GMT -5
Hehehe... I've been a bit busy with school and stuff, well that's all about to change. The difference will be that I'm not gonna be on the computer as much as usual anymore, but oh well. Well I've finally decided to work on more of my story since I know people want to read it. I think. Chapter Three: ClassesChris awoken the next morning by a pillow. He groggily opened his eyes and immediately jumped out of bed as he recognized the glaring eyes of his sister Pansy. He ran around the room gathering his books and trying is best to get dressed while Pansy was in the room. WHen he finally decided he had suffered enough he returned her glare. "Will you get out of the boy's dorm!? I know you resemble one, but that's no reason to be in here." Chris said arrogantly. Pansy's glare intensified as she threw another pillow at him and left. Chris sighed and looked around at the other Slytherin boys who were only now just getting up and looking at their clocks. Chris apologized to the others as he finished dressing and ran out into the common room. "Hey! Watch where you're going!" a girl yelled as Chris almost ran into her. "Sorry." Chris said, his eyes on the floor. "It's alright! I'm Elmmiire." the girl said as she extended her hand. Chris looked up at the girl, for a Slytherin she seemed quite forgiving and even.... happy? Chris shook her hand and smiled at her before he felt a slight tapping on his shoulder. Elmmiire also noticed this and smiled politely. "G'day Draco." she said cheerily. "Hullo." Draco drawled. As the two engaged in a conversation Chris slipped away and made his way down to breakfast, where he was supposed to meet Erik and Bloody Fang. He felt a slight but persistent tug at his sleeve and when he looked up, he found himself staring right at Leia, the girl he had met on the train. "Come on Chris! Let's go to breakfast, I want to tell you about what you missed on the train!"
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Post by coldmercurywitch on May 6, 2002 8:03:41 GMT -5
YAY!
You wrote more and finally met me, even if it was only for a brief moment. ;D
Umm....question. Why did Draco drawl "Hullo" at me? I'm confuzzled.
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Post by Chris_Valentine on May 6, 2002 8:52:26 GMT -5
It's my story and if Draco-darling want to drawl at you he will. Actually let's just say Draco-dear isn't going to be all to nice to many people. The real question is: if he was gonna be mean why did he engage is a little pleasant conversation with you? Hm.. *thinks* I know! It's all part of my super secret secret plot! Mwahahahahahahahaha... so to answer your question I dunno.
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