Emma
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Post by Emma on May 19, 2004 11:45:29 GMT -5
Thanks, Appreciate it
Emotion? I supose I was emotional when I wrote it
and the other one, Im glad..... thats a great sign
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Post by Zicdeh on May 23, 2004 6:57:43 GMT -5
I really enjoyed both of those poems. I'm no poet myself, mind you ( ), but I thought they were very good, especially the second one, it's so.....nice Keep it up!
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Post by Emma on May 31, 2004 3:56:19 GMT -5
Ive been working on this poem, and Ive added 2 more verses, and the first one is more of a chorus. So I supose Its a song now....now I just have to add some music...LOL
Dancing in the stars The stars are out tonight, Neither fears nor fright, Can you prove that fears are dead, Your body is as stiff as lead, Let go, Let your body sway, to and fro, You start to sway, Hey, Come and join me, it's alright, You can dance with me tonight...
You ask me to dance, I jump at the chance, You lead me to a space, I'm in total bliss in your embrace, We sway together, Hoping to stay here forever, We stare into each others eye's, Away form each other, No-One could prize...
The stars are out tonight, Neither fears nor fright, Can you prove that fears are dead, Your body is as stiff as lead, Let go, Let your body sway, to and fro, You start to sway, Hey, Come and join me, it's alright, You can dance with me tonight...
The music is loud, but notice we dont, Theres people around, but move we wont, Being here right now together, Is enough to keep us happy forever, We get so close, arms around each other, A better feeling we're yet to discover, The music stops, people start to stare, But what they think, no we don't care, A blur of songs pass, and we chose to part, And from that day on, you've been in my heart..
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Post by katie on Jun 10, 2004 11:40:50 GMT -5
WOW! aww, that is so sweet! sounds a bit misleading... but WOW all the same! keep it up! ;D ...WOW!! they r so good. i jelous lol
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Post by katie on Jun 14, 2004 9:48:44 GMT -5
I have one of Emma's poems which is little but fun ;D I thought I would put it up here seeing as it is hers.
Live for the moment, Live for the day, Live for the sentence, Yay OK!
Life is a gift, Death is the end, Everyone likes a giver, So a pound you'd me lend!
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Post by Potter723 on Jun 14, 2004 10:55:07 GMT -5
emma, that "dancing in the stars" really, really good...its great..
i think it'd go great with a normal guitar..kinda, half sung, half said.. (just image it being said with a guitar)
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Emma
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Post by Emma on Jun 14, 2004 11:00:11 GMT -5
I nearly forgot that one Katie...LOL
Thanks, I have tried to add a tune, and failed misrabley
LOL
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Post by katie on Jun 18, 2004 11:00:02 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]lol music, yes, musics good. want any help? lol. im in the process of listening to songs on cd/radio and seeing if i can play the song on the keyboard. lol[/glow]
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Post by Emma on Jun 25, 2004 10:08:30 GMT -5
[glow=0000CC,2,300]I've been writing in school too
Music work (tuesday): Chorus- If I was to die tomorrow, I would wait for you If you were to die tomorrow Would you wait for me too?
Verse 1- I would find it hard to cope, I'd miss you more each day Id wish so much for you back If you were to pass away
Chorus- If I was to die tomorrow, I would wait for you If you were to die tomorrow Would you wait for me too?
Verse 2- Without you, hell would take over Without you, It would seem like my angels flown away I'd think of you in heaven and wonder how long will I have to wait till we meet again
Cheesy I know, but it was supose to be a pop song LOL
and English (today): When life is tough And people start to shout You think you've had enough The point you start to doubt Your heads starts to ache, Thinkin of all this stuff Wondering what you've done, and what the pains about
Just remember, We're in it together, And your not gunna live forever Make the most of every moment And think of all the things you've done Dont give up, dont give in Its your life, Your living in
Tada, I havent been feeling great lately, but Hey, I can still be positive....We're in it together, eint we!!! LOL[/glow]
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Post by Potter723 on Jun 25, 2004 11:55:17 GMT -5
wow.....they're both great!
you know, it seems to e that you could mix them both up and make one..
or,. is that just me?
either way, they are both brilliant!
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Post by Emma on Jun 25, 2004 12:21:52 GMT -5
[glow=0000CC,2,300]Thanks, Ill keep Writing I supose, sometimes it easy, other times, I have nothing to start on[/glow]
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Post by katie on Jun 28, 2004 9:59:22 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Hey, Emma's making me put my english poem up here. Hope you like The MoonA silver coin in a wishing well, a ball of energy for a spell, the end of the day and the start of night, chasing away every fright. And dancing with the stars so bright, will you dance with them tonight? Lingering high up in the sky, birds and insects daren't go so high, gazing upwards people will see, it looking down so graciously. A sleeping draught for you and me, singing to us silently.[/glow]
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Post by Emma on Jun 28, 2004 10:33:50 GMT -5
[glow=0000CC,2,300]Can you tell I gave her some inspriation....LOL
Come on Katie, Its great, and thats the only reason I asked you to put it on (Not to show me up, so you can stop now, or Ill lose my fans.....Joke LOL)[/glow]
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Post by claretta "happy and not" on Jun 29, 2004 8:28:23 GMT -5
It's a great poem! Well done!
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Post by Emma on Jun 29, 2004 9:40:45 GMT -5
[glow=0000CC,2,300]Hey Clarette, welcome back
Clarette meet Katie, Katie meet Clarette Clarette, Katies one of my best friends, from school. Katie, Clarettes one my best friends on TD[/glow]
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